帮忙改一下错（英语）

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/05 19:43:19
i will stay in dresden one year. i will be very happy if you try to make friends with me . i love music,sunny and cats,maybe you want to know chinese music ,en~i am a good choose.or, you have some question about china,you also can ask me .sometimes i need your help,because i didn't know germann school very well. wish have a nice year with you!
关于with you ~因为我在德国的学校，是希望可以和他们一起度过快乐的一年。关于这一点，可不可以考虑一下呢？而且没有大写是因为太懒了，可以不用改了。具体是语法的错误。谢谢了

I will stay in Dresden for one year. i will be very happy if you try to make friends with me . I love music,sunny days and cats.Maybe you want to know Chinese music ,then i will be your good choice.If you have some questions about china,you also can ask me .Sometimes I need your help,because i don't know Germann school very well.
Wish a nice year with you!

O(∩_∩)O~ 错误还是不少，我都嵌在原文里了，希望对你有帮助。

by：宁唯.

will stay in dresden for oneyear.i will be very happy if you can try to make friends with me.i love music,sunshine and cat,maybe you want to know chinese music ,en~i am a good choise.or, you have some question about china,you also can ask me .sometimes i need your help,because i didn't know germann school very well. wish you have a nice year !

one--a , sunny--sunny days , also can--can also ,

恩 我就找出这几个 呵呵

你写个中文的，我帮你翻一下看看那

(I )will stay in (D)resden (for) one year.(I) will be very happy if you try to make fri