翻译英文 是否有错误 给改正下

口语太严重了
1.come into the door,中文：走进门，英文不怎么说
2.it is 用得不恰当，表达得很苦涩
这样吧
When you come in,there is a big garden.
或者
When you come in ,you will see a big garden

有错，第一句话是个问句。所以必须要语序倒一下。
when did you come into the door
就像是who are you。问句必须调换语序
谢谢

When you come into the door ,you will find a big garden.

into 改为inside through更恰当

it`s a big garden when you came into the door.这样会好点.