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Forrest gump
In a normal afternoon, I saw a famous film what make me change myself. Its name is Forrest gump.
The novel begining of the movie attract my heart. A piece of feather stop near his shose. He hold some chocolates and talk about something to a girl. His mother always said:” life was like a box of chocclaes. You never kown what you are going to get”. There are many beautiful sentences like this in the movie touch my heart the same. Frome this i can get much significance of life.
After the second war Forrest Gump was born a small country in south of UAS. It is very terrible .because he is a mentally handicapped boy. But he do not give up and his mother encouraged him and say :”you are no different than anybody else is . luckyly, the god didn’t abandon him,at the same time,he is a talent player. He can run fast. His heart and mind is pure like water. in the school bus,he meets a girl who is his true love. In the junior of school he went to a collage and got a n

In an ordinary afternoon, I watched a famouse movie which had changed me. It is 'Forrest Gump'.

3 attracted ,stopped
4. shoes, he was holding some cho...talking ...
5. will never know
6. touching my heart .不要the same
7. I also got to understand much essence of life from them.
8. second world war, USA,
9. he was a mentally...he did not
10. you are not different...
11. 把所有关于阿甘的时态全部改成过去式，我就不一个个改了。
12. a girl who would be his true love
13. 什么叫 in the junior of school??? at last,
14. he was invited as a honoured guest ...
15. after graduation from university,
16. the war ended,
17. finally ,he became a gardener....

应该用过去时，把动词改为过去式。
I watched a famous film which made me change myself.
The novel at the begining of the movie attracted my heart.
:” life is like a box of chocclaes.用原形is.
in the movie touch my heart the same movie 后加 which.
But he do not give up 改成 did。