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Question: Should students be allowed to drive at the age of 15?
No, I don't think students should be allowed to drive at the age of 15 because young students are impulsive and they can not afford cars by themselves.
Firstly, students should not be allowed to drive at the age of 15 because young students are too impetuous to do make right choice. Teenagers enjoy racing. It’s the way they show off their cars to other students. However, they forget that racing is very dangerous, especially in cities full of vehicles. Usually these students are not professional race car drivers, so they are very likely to cause car accident. The young students will hurt other people and themselves badly. Also, students at 15 are too young to follow every traffic regulations. The percentages of teenager over speed and go in a wrong direction are very high. They bring unnecessary troubles to our society. Thus, driving at 15 is not supposed
I don't think students should be allowed to drive at the age of 15 because they are not only impulsive but they can not financially afford cars by themselves.
Firstly, young students are too impetuous to make right choice. Though teenagers love racing and showing off their cars to others, they don't realize that it is very dangerous to drive in cities full of vehicles. Usually students at the age of 15 are not professional car drivers, in most cases they are just the cause of car accidents. The young students will hurt other people and themselves badly. What's more, students at 15 are too young to follow traffic rules and regulations. The rate of over speed and driving in a wrong direction is high. They bring unnecessary troubles to our society.
Secondly, they can not financially afford cars. On the one hand, most of the students at 15 do not have full day jobs, or their part time jobs do not pay well either. Therefore, they need to ask their paren