英文作文 我生活的改变

changes in my live
Suddenly I notice that I’m already a young adult.This is the time I can make decisions on myself. I can have my own space to do the things I like；to buy the things which I want to buy；to choose the food I like to eat. My parents would not say many “NO！”to me like before. I feel that many things changes in my live.It become more freedom.Now I’m just like a bird fly in my own sky.

一转眼，我才知道我已经是一个小大人了。现在该是我自己的事情我自己做主的时候了。我可以有我自己的空间做我喜欢做的事情；买我自己想要的东西；选择我自己想要吃的食物。我的父母不会像原来一样总是什么事情都对我说“不”！我感觉很多东西在我的生活里都有了改变。我的生活变得更加的自由了。现在，我就像一只小鸟飞翔在我自己的天空。

这是我自己写的，不知道行不行。

老美写的：

Yes…I’m making changes in my life. Nothing is set in motion yet cause I’m still thinking about it all, but I definitely know where I’m going to start off with. What would that be? Quitting my current job as a telephone sales representative.

I absolutely HATE it. I can’t stand it any longer and it’s just ticking me off way too much. The supervisors are asswip