帮忙。。这篇短文写的对不对

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哪位英语高手帮帮忙。。

Hello , every one,my name is XXX, Today is my turn to lecture
,because this’s my first speech ,so , I’m a bitnervous。Now , let me tell you a joke。

Father: Well, Tom, I visit to your teacher today, and now I want to ask you a question. Who is the laziest person in your class?

Tom: I don't know, father.

Father: Oh, yes, you do! Think! When other boys and girls are doing and writing, who sits in the class and only watches how other people work?

Tom: Our teacher, father.

第一段有些小的问题。请看下面的:

Hello, every one, my name is XXX. Today is my turn to give the lecture, because this’s my first speech,so, I'm a little nervous. Now, let me tell a joke.