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My name is Siyuan Cao, I am an engineer. I have graduated from Hunan University for two years. When I was a student, I thought campus life was rather dull, and I didn't like my specialty too. But now I miss my university life and my classmate very much.
In September 10, 2003 I entered Hunan University, begun my campus life. During those seemingly dull four years, I had got a lot of knowledge. In my spare time, I used to stay at library or climb Yuelu Mountain with my friends. Sometimes, I visited Yuelu Academy, one of the greatest academies in Chinese History which has educated so many great men like Zeng Guofan, Zuo Zongtang, Cai E and so on.
I will never forget the day of June 25, 2007 when I graduated from Hunan University. If there is a chance I will go back to my Alma Master, visit my teachers and have a good view of Yuelu Mountain again.
My name is Siyuan Cao. I am an engineer. I have graduated from Hunan University for two years. When I was a student, I thought campus life was rather dull, and I didn't like my specialty, too. But now I miss my university life and my classmates very much.
On September 10, 2003, I entered Hunan University, and begun my campus life. During those seemingly dull four years, I had got a lot of knowledge. In my spare time, I used to stay at library or climb Yuelu Mountain with my friends. Sometimes, I visited Yuelu Academy, one of the greatest academies in Chinese History which has educated so many great men like Zeng Guofan, Zuo Zongtang, Cai E and so on.
I will never forget the day of June 25, 2007 when I graduated from Hunan University. If there is a chance， I will go back to my Alma Master, visit my teachers and have a good view of Yuelu Mountain again.
我觉得除了个别标点和连词介词，你写得很好
My name is Siyuan Cao. I am an engineer. I have graduated from Hunan Universi