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His name is Tracy McGrady and he is very healthy.
He often gets up early.After geting up and he exercises five times a week (这一句有问题吗,怎么与上一句衔接好)He never eats breakfast but he like eating very much.He drinks milk every day and sometimes he drinks coffee.As for fruit,he always eats two apples before going to bed.He sleeps for ten hours every night. On weekends, he otfen goes to visit his parents with his kids.Tracy loves his wife .So you see,he takes his wife to watch movies twice a week.
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His name is Tracy McGrady and he is very healthy.
He often gets up early.After getting up , he does morning exercises five times a week.Then he washes his face and brushes his teeth.He never has breakfast, but he likes eating snacks very much.He drinks milk every day or sometimes drinks coffee.As for fruit,he always eats two apples before going to bed.He sleeps for ten hours every night. On weekends, he ofen goes to visit his parents with his kids.Tracy loves his wife .So you can see,he watches movies with his wife twice a week. From his activities,we can see Tracy McGrady is a healthy man.How happy he is!
His name is Tracy McGrady and he is very healthy.He often gets up early.He exercises five times a week when he get up.He never eats breakfast but he like eating snacks very much.He drinks milk and sometimes he drinks coffee,too.As for fruit,he always eats two apples before going to bed.He sleeps for ten hours.On weekends, he otfen goes to visit his parents with