英语语法..本人是小白..

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I want to be a photographer. I love photography, I think that photography is very interesting. I love to shoot the dawn, sunset, rivers, and beautiful scenery. I really enjoyed taking pictures, because it help me record that I like and like my people and things

.... 本人乱写的.不知道哪里有错误 求高人指点

I want to be a photographer.没错I love photography, I think that photography is very interesting.没有连词的情况下，一句只有一个主语和谓语，逗号改句号I love to shoot the dawn, sunset, rivers, and beautiful scenery. 没错I really enjoyed taking pictures, because it help me record that I like and like my people and things动词错了，enjoy就行，helps， that不能引导宾语从句，意思也重复了，直接改成 because it helps me record my favourite people and things.