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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/25 06:30:49
本杰明并不想参加他们的斗争，直到他的妻子死去留给他5个孩子，眼前的现实和悲剧使本杰明开始转变，心灵遭受着冲击，但是过去战争中的残暴场面依然不断地困扰着他。
这时，他的他儿子杰布列却没有丝毫犹豫地开始投入到了争取自由和独立的斗争中，但当英军大举入侵而威胁到他的家园还杀死了他的二儿子时，他发现唯一能保护家园和家人的方式，就是全力捍卫年轻人民的自由。 战争已经不可避免，一个新的独立的国家正要诞生，本杰明决定跟随儿子而去，后来他带领着民兵与正规军配合，战胜了英国人，赢得了胜利。

我写的Benjamin and don't want to take part in their struggle, until he left his wife died of five children, the reality and tragedy to Benjamin began to change, suffer from heart, but in the past war atrocities scene still continuously bothering him.

At this time, he was the son of his Bristol jie to begin without hesitation into freedom and independence of the struggle, but when the British invasion and threat to his home also killed his two sons, he found that can only protect home and family, that is to defend young people's freedom. War is inevitable, a new independent nation was born, Benjamin decided to follow the son to...
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Benjamin didn't want to be involved into the war, until his wife died and left him with five children. Being freted by the reality and suffered from deep heart and tragedy, Benjamin began to change. But the past war atrocities scene still continuously bothering him.

At this time, Bristol Jie, Benjamin's son, joined the war without hesitation to fight for freedom and independence. However,when the British invasion threated his homeland and killed his two sons, he found that the only way to protect home and family is to defend the youth's freedom. War is inevitable, a new independent nation was born. Benjamin decided to follow his son to fight. Afterwards, he won the war and deafeated the British by leading the civil military and formal armies.

Benjamin decided to keep his son company to enter the battlefield,Then he conducted the militia to fight with the formal militant .At last,they defeated the english ,and won the war.