初学英语，每周一篇书面表达．请求改错！8

Today a classmate of mine left the school because of his poor performance in study.

　　He never takes a interet in study.(这里我觉得用take a interest in比较好！原因是有be在就有一种“状态”的成分在，状态就是某物一直是这个样子的。有动词就比较有“活动”的；不知道我解释清楚了没有，这是一种语感，你需要多多阅读才知道！)

　　He felt like leaving school, so
　　he didn't attend class.
　　(这里用了过去时，因为是对过去的一种描述！这里用feel like更能表达也那个男孩想要离开学校的那种心情！)

　　In his parents' eyes,as well as teachers,he is not a good student!
　　(这里最好是写成这种形式，因为有两个都是复数。)

　　But actually he is. He is a kind boy.(最好是不用man,你是不是想要表达“他是一个好人”？如果是，这里最好用boy OR person.)who just don't like to study. (用这种避免重复！而且这里是用了一个定语从句!)

　　Generally speaking, education want to all student is one manner. It was a tragedy! I'm dying he will succeed.
　　Everybody has his road. (这一段我不能确定是什么意思，你把中文发给我，我再给我翻！)

　　有这么多括号，是便于解释！回头你再自己编缉一下！^_^

一共几个错吧第一个是LEAVING

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