剑桥4 test1 writing task1 请英文好的帮忙改错～谢谢

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In the present age, with the development of technology and individuals’ demands of communication, there are increasingly types of media appeared in our daily life. I have choice three kinds of them I think have both advantages and disadvantages.
First, television is the most effective medium for communicating information in my mind. It is reasonable due to the fact that people can receive up-to-the-minute coverage in any time. Moreover, there are varieties of choices for TV audiences; therefore, they have opportunity to distinguish right from wrong. In terms of disadvantages, it is obvious that the financial gap between urban area and the rural area should eliminated by the authorities. To be more precise, the government should invest more money in TV industries.
Secondly, radio is also an imperative way for communicating information. On the one hand, there are two words to describe radio---cheap and convenient. In fact, it is totally free and the signals are prevalen

NOWADAYS, with the development of technology and PERSONAL demands for communication, INCRESING TYPES OF MEDIA HAS BEEN DEVELOPED. I WOULD LIKE TO COMPARE AND ANALYZE THREE OF THEM IN TERMS OF ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES
First, television is the most effective COMMUNICATION medium TO my mind FOR (the fact that) people can receive up-to-the-minute coverage(BU ZHI DAO) in any time. Moreover, TV AUDIENCES HAS GOT A NUMBER OF OPTIONS (FOR WHAT); therefore, they have OPPORTUNITIES to distinguish right from wrong. AS FOR disadvantages, it is obvious that the financial gap between urban area and rural area EXISTS AND should BE eliminated by the authorities. ANYWAY, the government should invest more in TV industrY.
Second, radio is also IMPORTANT for communicating information. RADIO CAN BE DESCRIBED BY TWO WORDS---cheap and convenient.ON THE ONE HAND, it is totally free and ITS SIGNAL CAN COVER A HUGE AREA,S0 technically people are able to listen to the radio wheENver they want.