【急】英语好的朋友进来帮个忙！

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我写了这篇英语作文，水平虽然不高，但还是没有十足的把握，想请诸位帮忙检查一下，有错误请指出来，包括词汇、短语、语法等等，谢谢了！！
I've had no friends.Because I grew up in poor health and I rarely went to school.But since I came to this school,I have made many friends.They are very take care of me, I am moved by their concerns and affection.so I want to talk about one of them.
She is a very cheerful girl,and she often helps me.For example,I feel my English is not good,and then she told me a lot about how to learn English better.Once my finger was burnt,then she went to buy medication for me without telling me.I was so moved that I had not word to say anything.
I always think that I'm a introverted and shy girl.she made me open my mind to more people.
1楼的朋友谢谢你，但是你扭曲了我的部分意思。
3楼的朋友，谢谢你的贴心，我看得很明白，但是我不清楚一点：“They cake care of me badily”这句cake或许是你拼错了，这我看得懂，但是我想问一下badily是什么意思？抱歉我没能查到。周三我就要用了，希望你能早点看到我的补充：）。

还行啦 基本上没问题，2楼的改错很不靠谱，楼主要有信心，我把原则性错误的地方改一下吧（有问题的地方我用【】标记，改在后面的括号里）

I've had no friends.Because I grew up in poor health and I rarely went to school.But since I came to this school,I have made many friends.【They are very take care of me】（They cake care of me badily）, I am moved by their 【concerns】（concern不是可数名词） and affection.so I want to talk about one of them.
She is a very cheerful girl,and she often helps me.For example,I feel my English 【is】（is去掉，not good 直接是feel的表语或者前面的feel改成think） not good,and then she told me a lot about how to learn English better.Once my finger 【was burnt】(got burnt),then she went to buy medication for me without telling me.I was so moved that I had 【not】（no） word to say anything.
I always think that I'm a introverted and shy girl.she made me 【 open】（to open，让某人做某事make sb to do sth.） my mind to more people.

I didn't have any friends. Because I grew up in poor health and i rarely went to shool. Since I came to this scho