UC知道剑桥7 Test1 Task One 帮忙改错,评分
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The table shows the proprotion of money spent on a series of items by consumers in countries like Ireland, Italy,Spain, Sweden and Turkey in the year 2002.
From the table, it is not difficult to find that consumers in these countries tended to spend much less amount of money on clothing/footwear and leisure/education than on Food/Drinks/Tobacco.
In particular, Turkey is the country with teh most money spending on Food/Drinks/Tobacco(about 32.14%). Ireland has a similar figure (approximately 28.91), whereas the figure for the rest of three nations were much less, approximately 17% in average for that catagory.
For the money spent on Clothing and Footwear, there is not very large differentiations among these countries. Among which, Italy appears to be the country with the highest portion (9%), in contraction to Sweden, which has the least expenditure on that catagory(5.4%).
The trend of small variability continue
From the table, it is not difficult to find that consumers in these countries tended to spend much less amount of money on clothing/footwear and leisure/education than on Food/Drinks/Tobacco.
---->From the table, it is not difficult to find that consumers in these countries tended to spend much less money on clothing/footwear and leisure/education than on Food/Drinks/Tobacco.
In particular, Turkey is the country with teh most money spending on Food/Drinks/Tobacco(about 32.14%).
---->In particular, people in Turkey like to spend most on Food/Drinks/Tobacco(about 32.14%).
主语是人spend，不是country spend
in average for that catagory.
----> in average in that catagory.
For the money spent
---->For the spending...
there is not very large differentiations
---->there is not huge differentiation
基本不错。10分可以打6-7分。
不过，你能做到，只看你的文章，把图标大部分内容画出来吗？如果你画不出来，你就要想想，还差什么没有描述出来。
另外拼写错误，你在word里面