再帮我改一下，好吗（初一新生的自我介绍及话题）

Here teachers, the students everyone! I’m from in Grade one Class five. My name is XX.my English name is XX.It’s so yummy，isn’t it?
Today I’d like to talk about dream. I’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech.
Everyone has his or her own dream.：“Ideal is the beacon.”
Yes, dream is people’s beacon, with it, even in the darkest time, It‘s also able to illuminate the road aheadpeople can. dream is people’s wings, with it, people can fly.
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