英语课前三分钟演讲稿改错

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我的英语演讲稿..帮我看看有没有错的..还有几个单词也帮我补上

Hello,dvery body.Today I want to talk about a story of mine. Someboydody say,the story are very funny.But I don't think so...Ok.Let's begin

One day,the sky are black.And I was on my way home.suddenly,a hot girl come along.And she stood beside me. She say,"Are you handsome?'Whithout hesitation,I say"no".The the girl get angry and gei me a big 耳光。She say"no ~!You 骗人"she cried and wet away.
After the girl went away,T didn't move a think a moment.Mabe I am
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不会结尾了..帮一下~~还有些单词。不会的...

语法错误改改啊~~有分++++
我表现的是个笑话...

Hello,everyone.Today I want to talk about a story of mine. Someboydody say,the story is very funny.But I don't think so...Ok.Let's begin

One day,it was very dark outside(此处用black不太合适).And I was on my way home.Suddenly,a spicy girl came along.And she stood beside me and said:"Are you handsome?'Whithout hesitation,I said"No".Then the girl got angry and gave me a big slap on my face。She said"No ~!You are lying" she cried and went away.
After the girl went away,I didn't move but thought for a moment.Mabe I am
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后面不知道你想表达什么了，你先把故事说完再说
对了，提醒你一下注意时态的运用

第一行everybody还有somebody said"the story is funny
第二段the sky was black

she said! I said! 你在讲故事！所以都是过去式！！！
then the girl get angry and give me a big slap!
you lied to me !I didn't move and think a while！

结尾~wow！I am so handsome in girl’s eyes~

Hello,everyone.Today I want to talk about a story of mine. Someone sa