英语作文 一个我访问过地方

可以说是一个我拜访过的地方
I am visited a park on last week.There is a lake in the middle of park.There a lot of children in the lake swim.There is a tree in it.There eight bird in the tree.（再想一些公园里有的东西）I am play basketball and my good friends.I am very happy.（再想一些玩耍的事）
我尽力了，十一天前的作业你也应该做好了吧。就当帮我个忙。采纳吧。