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I went shopping with my friends in the afternoon.The supermarket was very crowded.We bought some cake and other desserts.I didn't buy sweets.I thought it's bad for my tooth and eyes.
It was already dark when we went out.But we had to go home on foot.It took us 30 minutes'walk.In spite of this,I really felt happy today.
翻译：
今天下午我和我的朋友去购物。超市里面很拥挤。我们买了一些蛋糕和其他的零食。我没有买糖。我觉得它对我的牙齿和眼睛不好。
当我们出来时天已经快黑了。但是我们不得不步行回家。行走用了30分钟。尽管这样，我今天依然觉得很开心。