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My name is CHEN , I am 20 years old now, I am from China, I am a outgoing boy, I like playing basketball, soccer, table tennis, there are running, etc., I prefer to help others, especially to help those in need of help people.
I want to go to England to study, because the British school is better, and that the environment is also very good and strong teaching ability, allow me to grow better and better equip themselves, and the side of the people are friendly, I like to that,
My plan is to England proper study or computer, because I want to be a powerful computer expert, in today's competitive society, and only to improve their skills and knowledge, as well as allow me to compete better with other people, not only the case , a good environment conducive to my morality, morality for everyone, is very important,
I also think that Britain is a good place for a pleasant climate, where the weather is warm, there are many attractions, it is wo
I want to go to England to study, because the British school is better, and that the environment is also very good and strong teaching ability, allow me to grow better and better equip themselves, and the side of the people are friendly, I like to that,
My plan is to England proper study or computer, because I want to be a powerful computer expert, in today's competitive society, and only to improve their skills and knowledge, as well as allow me to compete better with other people, not only the case , a good environment conducive to my morality, morality for everyone, is very important,
I also think that Britain is a good place for a pleasant climate, where the weather is warm, there are many attractions, it is wo
1）especially to help those in need of help people
这一句删掉people。
2） and the side of the people （）are friendly, I like （to） that,
括号加there，去掉to
自己看看吧，里面有很多句子不通。