UC知道英语小报告错误检查..
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Nowadays，many young people love video games.Of course，i am no exception.
Differ from the comics, we are the “characters” when we are playing video games.
We can devote all our vigor into the games and feel the emotions more directly.
With the frames and sounds,we can also learn the plots more easily.
As the science and technology become more and more advanced,the video games become better and better.
Especially the frames of the video games have changed a lot.
Playing video games becomes an enjoyment.
More importantly,video games can also keep us fit.
You can use “Wii” to do some exercise at home after working.
And evidence shows that playingvideo games can also cure the Alzheimer's disease!
Differ from the comics, we are the “characters” when we are playing video games.
We can devote all our vigor into the games and feel the emotions more directly.
With the frames and sounds,we can also learn the plots more easily.
As the science and technology become more and more advanced,the video games become better and better.
Especially the frames of the video games have changed a lot.
Playing video games becomes an enjoyment.
More importantly,video games can also keep us fit.
You can use “Wii” to do some exercise at home after working.
And evidence shows that playingvideo games can also cure the Alzheimer's disease!
Differ from the comics, we are the “characters” when we are playing video games.
should be changed as:
Different from the comics, we are the “characters” when we are playing video games.
And evidence shows that playingvideo games can also cure the Alzheimer's disease!
should be changed as:
And there are evidence shows that playingvideo games can also help to cure the Alzheimer's disease!
we are the “characters” when we are playing video games.
we were the characters in the video games. 这样改好一些吧