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I think managing money is not the thing that can be made it at one stroke,but should be penetrated into our life. Little things are associated with financing.有没有什么语法错误

I think managing money is not the thing that can be made it at one stroke, 此句
1. think接否定应该体现在think上,因此应该说, i don't think managing money is a thing that ...
2. the thing改为a thing,因为这里不需要特指是哪一次的事,只需要概况整个这种情况;
3. 然后,can be made it这里的it 要去掉,因为it指代的是a thing,这已经被从句的引导词that指代了,因此it重复。

4. but should be penetrated into our life 前面改为句号,后面改为it should be ...因为整个前面是以don't think起句的,跟在否定式后面是不正确的

5. Little things中的Little改为few,litte和few不加冠词表示否定是没错,但是可数名词用few

其他是正确的

I don't think managing money is a thing that can be made at one stroke. It should be penetrated into our life. Few things are associated with financing.