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It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from
experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?（题目）
In china,it is almost a tradition that students gain all they need in books,in classes.But nowadays,when
everything in the world are developing in tremendous speed,this traditional educating system seems to be out of
date.the view"the knowledge gained from experience is more important than the knowledge gained from books"has
already had a number of supporters.A contrast that which kind of knowledge is better is inevitable.
As the supporters of knowledge gained from books often point out, with books,you can always keep yourself
learning systematically ,because the content of a book must have been well organized when edited.Thus you will have
a complete knowl
experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?（题目）
In china,it is almost a tradition that students gain all they need in books,in classes.But nowadays,when
everything in the world are developing in tremendous speed,this traditional educating system seems to be out of
date.the view"the knowledge gained from experience is more important than the knowledge gained from books"has
already had a number of supporters.A contrast that which kind of knowledge is better is inevitable.
As the supporters of knowledge gained from books often point out, with books,you can always keep yourself
learning systematically ,because the content of a book must have been well organized when edited.Thus you will have
a complete knowl
写得还可以，但是记住事例最好有两个，具体到细节的细节。托福看的是你的思考能力，为什么这么想一定要说清楚。
最好是 开头→段落一（事例+论证）→段落二（事例+论证）→段落三（这个力所能及的话最好写，同样是事例+论证）→结尾点题
三个段落关系可以是正、正、正，亦可以是反、正、正。据说一般写得越多越容易拿高分……我的写作分数是28，一般来说照这个思路写就没有问题。当然，不能偏题。
这个在独立写作里大概拿15分中的十二到十三分吧。用自己的观点例证还有待加强~