翻译几句话，要自己翻译的，不要机译，谢谢

It has become a certain phenomenon and trend both in China and the world that property needs to be transported and ungraded nowadays, and in this financial process, financial service has decisive function. This passage starts with the role that finance plays in the process of property transprotation as well as ungrading, and then analyse the current condition and shortage of the financial model that China is now conducting, and furthermore, it provides some advice for China's constructing highly effective financial service system which aims at propelling the transportation and ungrading of property.

这句子太长了也,不过感觉还好，逻辑和句子结构都特清楚，翻译得也挺顺。希望能帮上忙。