求英语高手写篇小作文 急急急

Nowadays many schools keep their students in school all day long.We have different ideas about that.Now let me tell you our opinions.

Some of us hold the idea that if the school keep us all day long ,our freedom will be limited.Moreover,we may lose a lot of social opportunities.Besides,we can't develop our interests and
hobbies well.

One coin has two sides,some students thingk that school is a space to learn the knowledge,the only thing we should do is staying there to study.What's more,because we lack self?awareness,without the guide of teachers,we may make mistakes.

In my view,it would be better that school don't keep us in school all day long.After all ,textbook knowledge is not the only thing we should learn

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