UC知道帮我检查一下英语日记
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Saturday,October 11, 2009
Today i book a basic class .The class's subject is weather.The weather has another mean that
describe the somebody was ill.For example "I'm under the weather" .In the class a girl is as white as snow
sat by my side.But i still go to listen to the teacher.Today It's cloud(overcast).I like cloud very much.i
offten walk on the street that wait for rainning when it's cloud.The wind is blowing than i walking in the
rain. it's feel so good.But sometime it's stormy than lightning usually accompanies thunder bad luck.
Many people like sunny.In the hoilday someboday have a sunbath at the seaside.some clouds floating
in the sky so beautiful.The temperature between 33 and 36 degrees celsiues(centigrade) so
comfortable.
Saturday, October 11, 2009
Today I have booked a basic class .The class's subject was weather. Weather has another meaning which describes that somebody is ill, for example, I'm under the weather. A girl sat by my side has a white skin as the snow. But I still listened carefully to the teacher. Today is cloudy (overcast).I like cloud very much. I often walk on the street and wait for raining when it's cloudy. The wind is blowing when I walking in the rain. It feels so good. But sometime it's stormy and lightning usually accompanies thunder. Many people like sunny. In the holiday many people will have a sunbath by the seaside. Some clouds floating in the sky so beautiful. The temperature between 33 and 36 degrees Celsius (centigrade) is so comfortable.
太中式化了，又不方便改变你的句式，只改了语法错误。。。
Today I book a basic class .the subject of the lesson is weather. The weather has another meaning that it can be used to describe somebody was ill.For example "I&#