明天我们班级要有老师来听课 老师因以前我得罪过她而记仇，先将明天内容写在下面，望各位给予校正。

首先我告诉你，大可不必害怕老师会记仇什么的，没有那么狭隘的老师吧，
就算是她记仇了，更不会叫你了，因为她还怕你在众人面前给她难堪呢

天啊。。。句式是不是太简单了 还有语法错误
我提供一份吧

My name is Gezijun,I'm 11 years old. I'm from ZhungGheng .

I like reading books , singing songs,dancing and riding

my bicycle.I like eating moon cake because it's very delicious.

and I'm interested in playing computer games.

That's all, thank you.

以你的年龄写成这样足够了
相信我吧 我是高中生了哦

你的句子有很多处语法错误，建议你用二楼那位的My name is Gezijun,I'm 11 years old. I'm from ZhungGheng .

I like reading books , singing songs,dancing and riding

my bicycle.I like eating moon cake because it's very delicious.

and I'm interested in playing computer games.

That's all, thank you.
加油，祝你明天顺顺利利

I Can eat moon cake
不要