写了篇托福英文口语文章 请求狠拍砖

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/16 13:44:41
i think the most memorable event is a basketball game in my college。this basketball game gave me lots of inspiration about life。for example,when i encounter difficulties in my life, i can to face bravely。teamwork is very important.as long as never give up never lose hope,nothing is impossible.our basketball team is the last one of our group at that time ,in my memory.we would have to face the winner of another group.we folded so much pressure,but through the joint efforts of our team,we finally won.thanks of our team.

没细节，没重点，内容好平淡。没连接词。
错误太多了，好好理顺了再写吧。

i can to face bravely。（can 不加 to。。）而且这个EXAMPLE 很突兀。

一段中的中心句一定要放前2句里，要不然老外就看不懂了。

would have to 是什么意思（本来要做却没做?)

folded so much pressure(fold 第一次看到这样用）

应该这些是不够说的吧，45S可能不够说。还有你主要说 了两个方面。gave me lots of inspiration &teamwork，尝试最少说三个吧。那样是比较主流的回答方式

至于楼上说的语法，只要是没有重大的明显人称单复数时态的错误，口语的要求没有那么高，不是作文，让人听懂就行，重点是你的内容。论证，例证

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