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Through nearly two month-long university lives,let me anew know the university life. The university life does not look like such leisurely and carefree which in the novel writes, also does not look like in the high school life that kind to constrain.It is in the life an important turning point.Let us anew realize to own value.The university an own big stage what lets us demonstrate.Thinks before pays the labor and the fatigue,the university richly colorful life lets us anew have the self-confidence.I have a dream.And I believed that my university life can be happier.
I must to strive!And I believe myself!

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During nearly two-month's university life(through该成during，表示在..期间，two-month中间要加—,Life表示生活，单数）， it made me know what the university life is.

The university life doesn't look like so leisurely and carefree like what the novel writes. Also, it is not similar to high school life which has so many constraints. It is an important turning point in life. It lets us realize our own value. An university is a big stage which lets us prove ourselves. When we think of the labor and effort we have paid before, the colourful life in universities lets us restart to have our own self-confidence. I have a dream that my university life can be happy(或happier)

I must fight for it（或strive for it). And I belive (in) myself.