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Today, October 1st, is the National Day of the People's Republic of China. This year is the 60th aniversary of China. On the National Day, people were very happy, because there has been 60 years since our country was established. On every National Day, many people celebrate with the national flags in hand. In Beijing, the capital of China, lots of people paraded to celebrate today. Everybody was happy and excited. The atmosphere was so lively. Do you want to know and see it? Come to visit us on the National Day!

1st Oct is the national day of china.Today is the 60th years of the national day of china.At this time, people are very happy beacause new China are 60 years old .Then every year of this day ，people hang the national flag up to celebrate. At the capital of China-Beijing, there are a lot of people to parade and celebrate today.Everybody are happy and very exciting.It is very lively.Do you want to know and see it? Come and visit us for the National day of China.