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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/09 08:12:44
I HAVE lots of things to do in my free time.
When I finish my homework,I often play basketball with my best friend.It makes me strong and healthy.
When I have free time, I sometimes go out with my parents.I’m happy to be with my family.
I also like music,Because music is very

Interesting and it relaxes(使放松) me.
Sometimes I read jokes on the internet.They make me laugh.I like to share them with my friends.
I’m looking forward to(期待) the summer vacation(假期),because I will be able to swim in the sea and enjoy the sunshine.
I love the things I do in my free time, because they bring me pleasure.
回答最好是英文的,或中英对照的 好的有加分

有开头I HAVE lots of things to do in my free time.
,有结尾I love the things I do in my free time, because they bring me pleasure.
相互照应
中间列举的几项活动不少,并且都有说明喜欢的原因。

I don not konw, sorry.