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It was 5 years after the end of Snow White’s story.
I worked in my office when one was knocking at my door.
"Come in, please," said I.
A fat woman whose skin was as white as snow came in and took off her hat. She turned toward me,"Hallo, Mr.Freud. My name is Snow White."
"Hallo, Ms.Snow White. Take a seat, please," I said, "What's the matter with you?"
"I...uh..." Snow White became embarrassed, her face was a little bit red. She said,"I just can't stop overeating. I feel uneasy if nothing is in my mouth. Therefore, I became too fat so that my husband treated me coldlier and coldlier."
"Ms.Snow White, take it easy," I said,"In my opinion, your ego is not strong to keep your id down. You always want to feel good, do whatever you want, right?"
"Yes. I think I need more control. By the way," Snow White took out cigarette case, fixing her eyes on me,an

It was 5 years after the end of Snow White’s story.
I 【was working】 in my office when 【someone knocked】 【on】 my door.
"Come in, please," 【I said.】
A fat woman 【with】 skin was as white as snow came in and took off her hat. She turned 【towards】 me,"【Hello】, Mr.Freud. My name is Snow White."
"【Hello】, Ms.Snow White. Take a seat, please," I said, "【what's wrong?】"
"I...uh..." Snow White became embarrassed, 【and】 her face 【turned】 a little bit red. She said,"I just can't stop 【eating.】 I feel uneasy if nothing is in my mouth【，and now I've become so fat】 that my husband 【is treating】 me 【colder and colder.】【 注：没有 coldlier 这个词】
"Ms. Snow White, take it easy," I said,"In my opinion, your ego is not strong 【enough】 to keep your id down. You always want to feel good 【and】 do whatever you want, right?"
"Yes. I think I need more 【self】 control. By the way,"