英语句子语法

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/28 20:23:49
我写的这个长句子有问题吗??

There are the majority of people who deem that successful people prefer to do something which is difficult and risk for them rather that something that they can do very well

没看出来。就是定语太多了

大问题没有。
majority前面的the可以去掉,risk改成形容词的riskful或者risky。
rather than 后面改成do something与前面prefer to do对应。

还行,应该是rather than 吧