高分！！！！！高手请找出我的语法错误，英语文章

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The main purpose of the students is to learn useful knowledge and put them into real practice. Here is a question, which learning method is the most efficient way for a student? Studying in a traditional classroom from teachers or learn it by themselves? Well, in my point of view, I definitely will choose the first choice.

First, teacher is a professional people who have so much teaching experience, skills, and, of course, the most important aspect--------professional knowledge. When a student are facing some tough questions which are themselves cannot understand why was wrong. At this moment, teachers not just could help you to understand those certain subject questions, such as come from Math, Geology or English. but also point some shortages that you could never find them by yourself. If a students feel nervous during the exams, of course did not do it well, and have a low score. As a result, that students may think himself is so stupid and maybe even do not want stu

1Studying in a traditional classroom from teachers or learn it by themselves?
前后应该对应一下吧，前面是动名词后面怎么成了learn了？
2 I definitely will choose the first choice
后面用choice不太好，一般不用choose a choice吧？
3 When a student are facing some tough questions which are themselves cannot understand why was wrong.
a student了后面怎么是are?
定从有点小问题，建议改为When a student is facing some tough questions which they themselves can't understand.
4 teachers not just could help you to understand those certain subject questions, such as come from Math, Geology or English. but also point some shortages that you could never find them（去掉them) by yourself.
改为：teachers can not only help you understand...such as math(小写）but also point out(注意out)some shortages that you could never find by yourself.
5If a students feel nervous during the exams, of course did not do it well, and have a low score
students该为student(后面的也都改掉） of course后改为he won't do it well
6 As a resul