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Governments should focus on more on preservation of environment rather than ecnomic development?do you think so?以下是正文
Contemporarily,people in growing number are paying more attention to preservation of environment and the development of economic.However some people think that governments should focus on more on ecnomic development because superstructure condition is up to the economy level.It means that development of economic determins development of society and technology.But I ,individually,hold the opinion that governments shoud focus on more on preservation of environment.The explanations are as following.
One of the most importamt is preservation of environment is protecting our homes.Because a good environment provides us more convenient to study, to dwell in and to work.You will be in good health and a good humor to product more social value and wealth,which is the important factors to the economic development.Assuming that we are living in the environmental pollut
Contemporarily,people in growing number are paying more attention to preservation of environment and the development of economic.However some people think that governments should focus on more on ecnomic development because superstructure condition is up to the economy level.It means that development of economic determins development of society and technology.But I ,individually,hold the opinion that governments shoud focus on more on preservation of environment.The explanations are as following.
One of the most importamt is preservation of environment is protecting our homes.Because a good environment provides us more convenient to study, to dwell in and to work.You will be in good health and a good humor to product more social value and wealth,which is the important factors to the economic development.Assuming that we are living in the environmental pollut
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说实话，猛地一看你这篇文章挺好，但细读发现有一些语法错误，标点符号使用不规范，连词副词不分，而且有些句子太中文化了，不符合英语表达方法！
综上所述，这篇文章能得2.5-3.5分（正规评分没这个标准，但实际给分是有0.5分的。我的意思是这篇文章能得3分左右）
1.5 如果你能碰上个好人的话
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