I am sincere and have strong sense of responsibility病句修改

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/26 10:16:31
就是想表达“我为人诚实,有强烈的责任感”,主要是后半部分“have strong sense of responsibility"可以怎么修改就可以和前面的be动词保持一致了呢?

P.S. 其实一共有三句话,结构类似(有点排比的感觉),这第一话总觉得是病句

请各位高手指点~

楼上的说的不对诶……这个句子中间有and 是一个并列结构,所以am 与 have并不矛盾
是a sense 这一点要注意
按照楼主的要求改的话
I am sincere with a strong sense of responsibility.
如果不要按照be的结构 也可以说成
I have a quality of sincereness and a strong sense of responsibility.

这句话确实是病句

因为 该句子中 am 和 have 都作谓语。

而句子结构中主语后面只能跟一个谓语,所以可以改成并列句:
I am honest and I have a good / high sense of responsibility. (and前am做谓语,and后have做谓语)


I have a good / high sense of responsibility and sincerity in + 某方面(此句have 作谓语)


I am honest and responsible...(此句am 做谓语,但不推荐这种译法)

PS:表示“强烈责任感”一般都用have a good / high sense of responsibility

i have strong sense of responsibility and sincerity in....
i have strong sense of responsibility, of sincerity and ...把后面的词也可以放进来只要是名词就行。
不然你只能改成be responsible了。

I am a sincere person with strong sense of responsibility

I'm sincere and reliable.

I am sincere and having strong sense of responsibility