请高人指点我的雅思作文。但说无妨。

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/14 01:40:03
Do you a or disa with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important considerration in any relationship.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

As we know, to be honest is the basic quality demanded in people communication. Not only in any relationship but also it’s essential to people when we obtain respect or honor.
Telling the truth means do not hide something which you should give the answer or reaction. As an old saying goes, Man cannot live by bread alone. A citizen should care about his surrounding and community not only himself. Building a relationship between friends, families, cooperators even your enemies is a long team that we take the responsibility to tell something real to them. In additional, not any activities can durable without trust.
However, what will happened if we reject became honest? The situation we can image that like a car driving in road where every crossing we meet traffic lights tur

首先,太短!
理由太牵强,是问你该不该永远说实话,提人不能不关心他人有什么用?
语法错误不少!people's communication,mean的用法,not only换成besides,等等,自己再看看吧
第三段只能算是比喻,不叫例子。PS:我不知道这个比喻什么意思。。。
高级词汇不多,“all in all”?太低级了。
这篇文章顶多也就六级水平吧,我只能说:继续努力吧!