大家能帮帮我么 看看我有什么语法错误吗 谢谢大家了 嘿嘿 我会加分的!!!

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/22 17:43:24
我们老师让我们做一个关于我们自己的一个物品的演讲,一下是我写的。我写的是钢琴,大家能帮我看看有什么语法错误吗 如果能帮我加一两句的那就太好了。就是关于钢琴的就可以。嘿嘿!!!答得好会加分的哦!!!
My object is a piano. It was bought by my mother from when I was 7 years old. I had it has been for ten years. It is a special the existence to me. Sometimes, it is like my best friend,and always accompanied on my side. When I feel sadness, I will go to play the piano. Then, I will have a good mood everyday.

The subject of my speech is a piano. It was a present bought by my mother when I was 7 years old . I already have it 10 years. For me it is a special existence, just like my friend always accompany with me. When I was sad , I would go to play the piano, and then I can have a good feeling of the day.