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Choice in my life
God loves talking jokes. That’s definitely right! Actually, “crazy” things were always happening around me, “crazy”, it was another name for me, and it was called by my friend first. That means do things in your intuition. As for “choice” I never used to think about it. And things changed until last year.
As time goes by, the lessons of my graduate-review was getting harder and harder. At the same time, I was having my violin lessons strenuously. As a result, my parents told me I have to stop my violin lesson so that I can study attentive. I was not willing to do so, so I cried all day long. It seemed my parents wouldn’t like to stop my violin, too. Thing was got into a incompatible situation.
Till this, I have another thing that I want to tell you, that’s I want to go to the best High school in my town and then go to my willing university.
In the end, I choose my study.
From that on, ever since I heard of the sound of violin, I always enjoy i

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Choice in my life
God loves telling jokes. That’s definitely right! Actually, “crazy” things were always happening around me, “crazy”, it was another name for me, and one of my friends first called me that. It means that I do things in my intuition.And I never used to think about “choice”. And things changed last year.
As time went by, the lessons of my graduate-review were getting harder and harder. At the same time, I was having my violin lessons strenuously. As a result, my parents told me that I have to stop my violin lessons so that I can study attentively. I was not willing to do that, so I cried all day long. It seemed my parents wouldn’t like to stop my violin lessons, too. Things got into a incompatible situation.
I have another thing to tell you, I wanted to go to the best High school in my town and then go to my willed university.
In the end, I chose my study.
From then on, whenever I hear of the sound of violin, I a