英语作文。求通顺自然。写的好可追加30分。

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题目:(过去式)
写封信给你的朋友,说说你的周末过得怎么样。
上个休息日(10月14日,星期日),我过得非常有趣。
上午:去重庆动物园,看到一些海豹,一些鲨鱼和海豚表演,然后和朋友一起去打篮球、游泳;
中午:在肯德基吃午饭(汉堡包、可乐、水果冰激凌等);
下午:去新华书店看书,买了一些礼物。到鹅岭公园游玩并照相。

求语句通顺,不乏味。先20分,写的好追加30.
求英语帝速速帮忙,谢谢。

Dear friend,

How are you? I had a lot of fun last Sunday. On October 14, the weather was great. I went to visit Chong Qing Zoo. The performances of seals,sharks and dolphin were amazing. It was both interesting and exciting. After that, I played basketball and swam together with my friends. We had a delicious lunch at KFC. Hamburgers, ice creams and coke are all my favourate food. In the afternoon, I went to the book store and bought some presents for my parents. Finally, I visited a nice park called E Ling and took plenty of photographs. I really had a great time on the weekend.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,
XXX