我的一天(英语写作,非机翻),望语法指点

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Some time ago,I fire my boss,so again the leisurely life at home.

But I never up late,or called I don't up late.Because nomatter I sleep over twelve o'clock,the next day I wake up and stay at bed,in the end I get up then see the clock is always around seven o'clock,it's really makes wonder.Even though it become cold.

After get up,I will downstairs and drink a some water of warm to refrese myself, no matter what season,because I think it useful to my body.

When I have read book to eight o'clock,I downstairs to cook breakfast,before downstairs I always open the switch of washer. When accompanied by my mum to nine o'clock I will upstairs to study.

Eleven half an hour is lunch time.

On the afternoon at four half an hour,I go to buy food,but before downstairs I will put the washed rice to the cooker,because I can cook food that when I am coming.After dinner,I will stay at home a little then I will have a walk.I u

Not long before, I fired my boss and began to lead my leisurely life at home again. (这句话是追述过去的事情,因此必须用过去时。)
需要一个过渡句与下文自然衔接: But it doesn’t matter, for it is just what I hope for (或者it fits in exactly with my wishes).
From then on, I am never up late; or rather I can't lie-in at all. No matter whether I go to bed after twelve o’clock or not, it is always about seven o’clock the next day though I stay lazily in bed after waking up. How puzzled it is. It is all the same even if it is getting cold.
(1. 第一句话缺动词,睡懒觉的表达不对。2. because 和 no matter是两个性质不同的连词,何况两个连词不能重复使用;no matter 后必须要有 wh-连接词。3. 其他错误较多,不再一一指出,请自己对比。4. 有的地方属于修辞问题,也作了必要的修改。 )
After getting up, to make myself refreshed, I get used to going downstairs for some warm water to drink in spite of spring, summer, autumn or winter. I think it helpful to clean my viscera to keep me healthy.
I am usually reading a book until 8 o’clock and then I will be downstairs to cook breakfast. Before going down, I ha