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60 years ago, when our great、strong motherland has recovered from continuous war, there was a school has been built, which was unknown to lots of people.
60 years after that, maybe it was determined by fate, i became a part of this school.
this school is not like Tsinghua university, which has so many wise professor and top students, but this school has patient teachers and hard-working students.
this school is not like Peking university which has Wminghu, however, there are fresh air and green plants around us. i can read english while birds are singing, i can chat with my friends in a peaceful atmosphere.
this school is my school. not only can i learn knoeledge and principlea, i also feel a sense of being home. my favorite foor-kungpao chicken, my beloved friends who share my happiness and sorrow, my enjoyable books in the library.
thanks to 60 years of development and construction, the school become a distinctive college, and what a pleasure to be a mumber o
60 years after that, maybe it was determined by fate, i became a part of this school.
this school is not like Tsinghua university, which has so many wise professor and top students, but this school has patient teachers and hard-working students.
this school is not like Peking university which has Wminghu, however, there are fresh air and green plants around us. i can read english while birds are singing, i can chat with my friends in a peaceful atmosphere.
this school is my school. not only can i learn knoeledge and principlea, i also feel a sense of being home. my favorite foor-kungpao chicken, my beloved friends who share my happiness and sorrow, my enjoyable books in the library.
thanks to 60 years of development and construction, the school become a distinctive college, and what a pleasure to be a mumber o
60年前，当我们的伟大的，强大的祖国已经从战争不断复苏，有一所学校已经建成，这是不知道的人很多。
60年来之后，也许是决定命运，我成了这所学校的一部分。
这所学校是不是像清华大学，有极多的明智教授和最优秀的学生，但学校老师耐心和勤奋工作的学生。
这不是像北京大学已Wminghu，但是，我们周围有新鲜的空气和绿色的植物学校。我可以读英语，而鸟类的歌声，可与我聊天，在和平的气氛中我的朋友。
这所学校是我的学校。不仅可以了解knoeledge和principlea，我也觉得有被回家的感觉。我最喜欢的foor - kungpao鸡，我亲爱的朋友谁分享我的快乐和悲伤，我在图书馆愉快的书。
60多年的开发建设下，学校成为一个独特的大学，我非常高兴成为这所学校人数的。
这所学校的名字命名。