UC知道一个很难解释的短文改错---高中英语老师进----在线等
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Parents can be examples for their children. Here is a story.
One day a little boy watched his presents
planting flowers in the garden, and he then learned
to water and look after the little plants. When he
saw that the flowers were growing well, he
shared the happiness with his
parents. Their hard work resulted in beautiful
flowers in full bloom, and the boy’s father proudly
picked a flower and gave it to his wife to
show his love. But, to their（her）surprise, the （请改正此句）
boy picked all the flowers and presented them to his parents.
Only at this moment did the parents realize
the great effects which their behavior had on their child.
So I think that parents should try to be good teachers.
答案是将their改为her。我已经改正了。但我觉得还有一处错误，就是要将
One day a little boy watched his presents
planting flowers in the garden, and he then learned
to water and look after the little plants. When he
saw that the flowers were growing well, he
shared the happiness with his
parents. Their hard work resulted in beautiful
flowers in full bloom, and the boy’s father proudly
picked a flower and gave it to his wife to
show his love. But, to their（her）surprise, the （请改正此句）
boy picked all the flowers and presented them to his parents.
Only at this moment did the parents realize
the great effects which their behavior had on their child.
So I think that parents should try to be good teachers.
答案是将their改为her。我已经改正了。但我觉得还有一处错误，就是要将
你说的没错 however 使用逗号 but 不用逗号
但是 这个句子是特殊的 因为but后面还有一个to their（her）surprise呢
这是插入语句 插入语句 前后必须有逗号 这也是定律
所以没有错 就应该是这样
再说 改错没有改标点符号的
谢谢
希望我的回答能帮助你
可以用 to their surprise, 因为是指父母二人。
But 用的也对呀。如果该成 however 就太正式了。
I like this story very much though the writing is not that natural to read. This is a beautiful story. I can't stop loving the little boy.