UC知道英语比较好的大哥大姐姐帮忙改一下，谢谢！
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long long ago,my grandpapa talk a story to me.he said that long long ago,a lion came to his village,and ate lots of duck,chicken and a little boy .so my grandpapa let me stay at home in night.after that,i realize that the lion is strong,dangerous and feral.so we should stay away from it.because my grandpapa,i hate the lion,because the lion,i hate the zoo.
however,everybody can't predict the future.the thing all changed because of the zoo 105(room 105）.when first time i came to my bed,i saw a big lion is lying in front of my bed.i immediately remember the word that my grandpapa had said.the lion is strong,dangerous and feral.to my suiprise,the lion talk to me and introduce itself that he is XXX in the next day.and in the zoo,i also saw three giraffes XXX XXX XXX,they are so tall but week.three giraffes look so handsome and kind.but when three giraffes made a
hello everybody,today is mo(N)day.the weather is cold,so i suggest the girl(s) and teacher(s) you to wear something warm.(Boys you are strong,maybe you can lend your coats to the ladies)
my grandpapa (once told me)a story .he said that long long (time)ago,a lion came to his village,and (it) ate lots of duck,chicken and a little boy .(It was horrible).so my grandpapa (always)let me stay at home (at) night.after that,i realize(d) that the lion is strong,dangerous and feral.so we should stay away from it.because(of the story) my grandpapa (told me),i hate the lion,(so)i(also) hate the zoo.
however,(nobody can) predict the future.the thing(s) all changed because of the zoo 105(room 105）.when first time i came to my bed,i saw a big lion lying in front of my bed.i immediately remember(ed) the word that my grandpapa had said.the lion is strong,dangerous and feral.to my suiprise,the lion talk to me and introduce itself that he is XXX in the next day.at the zoo,i also saw thre