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最终分数给那个找出来的，如果还修改好了则给改好了的，如果写了三个并改了三个就给三个的。
题目： Should we celebrate western festivals?
nowadays，more and more chineses have celebrate western festivals，which maybe shows fashionable.
A lot of people inside it to celebrate it. some cultures by it， those people may feel romantic who had celebrate valentine's day.
the rest people are worried about the National cultures would be go away if many people don't aware it.
in my opinion, the world is more around, we can recept the western festival with the development eyes,but we had better take care of our own festivals , it is the basic of cultures.
我知道有很多错误，您找到两个就好，
一定把分数给那个最符合规则的，谢谢。
谢谢大家啊！！！
第二行，chinese不用加s；
第三行，celebrate用celebrated
第五行，不是inside it to是insist to
第六行，had celebrate 换成have celebrated
。。。。
先看了这么多语法错误，其实错误好多的
1. chineses-Chinese
2. nowadays，more and more chineses have celebrate western festivals 中 去掉 have
晕…错误也太多了吧……需要你解释一下才能改…你告诉我这些什么意思，我帮你好好改改吧…
have celebrate - celebrate
which maybe shows fashionable 你要表到什么意思？
a lot of people inside it 什么意思？
some cultures by it?
those people may feel romantic who had celebrate valentine's day 你要表达什么？
the rest people are worried about the National cultures would be go away if many people don't aware it.什么意思？
we can recept the western festival with the development eyes,but we had better take care of our own festivals , it is the basic of cultures. ？？？
the world is more around？？
大哥,这岂止两个错误?除了标题,简直通篇都是错.
1. nowadays，more and more Chinese celebrate western festivals.
2. A lot of people inside it to c