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请帮我查下里面的语法错误和Chinglish.谢谢~！
A:
You have a strong personality, do things adventurous.
Suggestion: You can ask elders or teachers when you faced with difficulties!
Suitable Occupation: police, coach, writer B: A man of insight. You can discriminate between what is right and what is wrong
Suggestion: Never cudgel your brains when you are unhappy. Try to find a friend and go shopping!
Suitable Occupation :cartoonist, accountant, director, designer
C：
You are blunt and not bother about trifles. Although you have a rough time on your way, it can always in the right direction
Suggestion: observe the world carefully; there may be a surprising discovery. Suitable career: leader, lawyer, command D:
D:
Your attitude toward life is very frank
Suggestion: set some intermediate targets.
A:
You have a strong personality, do things adventurous.
Suggestion: You can ask elders or teachers when you faced with difficulties!
Suitable Occupation: police, coach, writer B: A man of insight. You can discriminate between what is right and what is wrong
Suggestion: Never cudgel your brains when you are unhappy. Try to find a friend and go shopping!
Suitable Occupation :cartoonist, accountant, director, designer
C：
You are blunt and not bother about trifles. Although you have a rough time on your way, it can always in the right direction
Suggestion: observe the world carefully; there may be a surprising discovery. Suitable career: leader, lawyer, command D:
D:
Your attitude toward life is very frank
Suggestion: set some intermediate targets.
A:
应该用从句连接 You have a strong personality that let you do adventurous things.
时态错误when you are facing with difficulties!
B:
discriminate有歧视的意思,会造成误解 You can distinguish right and wrong 用between是chinglish
C:
it can错误,逻辑主语不一致,改为 you are always
D:
life attitude一般只有positive 和negtive,用frank 不大合适
E:
没必要用进行时,改为you always depend on
By being independent, you will feel a different world