UC知道帮我改下错，谢谢！
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Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you a very good restaurant in the local near my home.
Last Sunday, I and my family had an especially nice meal in the local restaurant called Two Friends. The restaurant was sitting in the District H where my family had been and it was been opposite of the Opera of H.
The proprietors of the restaurant had been two men who had kept a close friendship for many years. They named it Two Friends in order to make the restaurant involve this background.
The meal was very delicious. There was soup, beefsteak, chicken, chips, wine, etc…
I hope you to popularize with your newspaper this restaurant to other people if it is possible.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
I am writing to inform you a very good restaurant in the local near my home.
Last Sunday, I and my family had an especially nice meal in the local restaurant called Two Friends. The restaurant was sitting in the District H where my family had been and it was been opposite of the Opera of H.
The proprietors of the restaurant had been two men who had kept a close friendship for many years. They named it Two Friends in order to make the restaurant involve this background.
The meal was very delicious. There was soup, beefsteak, chicken, chips, wine, etc…
I hope you to popularize with your newspaper this restaurant to other people if it is possible.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
inform—tell
I and my family —my family and I
sitting—seated
been去掉
had been—were
involve—involved
beefsteak—beef steak
hope—wish
大致是这样，说实话，感觉这篇短文写得不咋样