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来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/27 10:51:26
Good afternoon everyone!
I am happy to stand here and have this opportunity to share some of my thoughts of cherishing everything around us with you
Fist. I would like to introduce myself here. I’m Liu Peng. From school of law.
Let’s have a brief view of my contents.
Before going to university, I was tired of my mother’s nagging ,and felt that my father was too harsh on myself. General thought quickly grew up to lead an independent life. But when I entered the university, I felt stay at home was much better than in school. Because there is mom and dad, there is an inseparable relationship.
Many people don’t know how to cherish family ties. When the affection was filled in around them, they are so cold. They always know how fortunate they are, until one day they lost it. So we shouldn’t ignore other things that we hold, such as friendship, health, life and so on.
OK. go on. A few days ago I have see a dairy in my friend’s blog. she just write some step

我很高兴站在这里,并有机会分享珍惜与你周围的一切,我的一些想法
上大学之前,我累了我母亲的唠叨,并认为我的父亲对自己太苛刻。一般认为迅速长大后独立生活。但是当我进入大学时,我觉得留在家中,远远超过在学校好。因为没有爸爸妈妈,有一个不可分割的关系。
拳头。我想在这里介绍一下自己。我刘澎。从法学院。
让我们来我的内容的简短看法。
上大学之前,我累了我母亲的唠叨,并认为我的父亲对自己太苛刻。一般认为迅速长大后独立生活。但是当我进入大学时,我觉得留在家中,远远超过在学校好。因为没有爸爸妈妈,有一个不可分割的关系。
行。继续下去。前几天我看到我朋友的博客的奶制品。她只是写一个游戏的步骤,但给我留下了深刻的印象。今天我想和你一起玩游戏一起。
许多人不懂得珍惜家庭关系。当感情在他们周围填充,他们是如此寒冷。他们总是知道他们是幸运的,直到有一天,他们失去了它。因此,我们不应该忽视其他事情,如友谊,健康,生活等方面,我们认为,。
请拿出一张纸和圆珠笔。
行?你准备好了吗?让我们继续写5个重要的东西传给你,一张纸。你可以写你认为这是重要的长期任何东西。然后,我们假设发生了事故,你不得不放弃了5个项目之一。然后,再有意外,以四个左边的一个又一个,直到只有一个。
你完成呢?我想你也应该得到的东西。
把我评价到最佳答案!