这篇英语作文有语法错误吗？

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Come to Mr Cool’s Store！We sell pants for only ＄30. Do you like sweaters？ We have sweaters in red green and white for only ＄15.We have bags in all colors at ＄2 each. Do you like shorts and hats？
We have beautiful shorts for only ＄6 and yellow hats for only ＄5.
That’s not all. Can you believe it？ Come to Mr Cool’s store and have a look！
这是我写的英语作文，有没有语法错误或建议，尽管提！
有建议尽管提，或者有什么好句子也给我说说该用在哪

Do you like sweaters？ 可以改成 would you like a new sweater that is of the latest cutting for this winter? (你想不想要在这个冬天有一件最新剪裁的毛衣）听起来不会比较生硬。

" We have sweaters in red green and white for only ＄15." 这句最好把for only ＄15改成and each costs only $15.因为别人会不知道你是在说三件一共那个价钱还是什么。还有We have sweaters in red green 的 red green 中间加顿号。

通常shorts 不会用beautiful 来形容。你可以改成fashionable就是时尚流行的短裤。也可以给其他物品加上如nice,that is suitable to you,the latest design 等形容词，看上去会更生动

哈哈，好可爱的文章...语法是没啥错误，就是很单调的句式，不像一篇文章，当然如果是英语入门中那也算是不错了

1。We have sweaters in red green 的 red green 中间加顿号。
2、Do you like shorts and hats的and改or。