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One late afternoon,on my way back school,I saw a strange man with a pair of black glasses stands beside a house when I went by a street corner. I sense someting wrong so I hid myself by a tree to see what would happen to him.After a while,the man looked about and found no one aroud .急!!!谢谢

back to school
standing beside a house
sense--feel
by---behind

1.One late afternoon,on my way back school
改为：One late afternoon,on my way back to school。

2.I saw a strange man with a pair of black glasses stands beside a house when I went by a street corner
改为：I saw a strange man with a pair of black glasses standing beside a house when I went by a street corner。

3.I sense someting wrong so I hid myself by a tree to see what would happen to him
改为：I felt someting wrong so I hid myself by a tree to see what would happen to him