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[What motivate people to change? From OG test 1]
My family is located in the Yangtze River. One day at dusk, when I was on a rocking chair enjoying the fresh air and the magazine when I suddenly ran over my brother, an 11 years old boy. ”BOA, what do you think contributed to people's changed?” “What? Why did you suddenly asking such a question?” I was very surprised. “It’s homework. Oh, I really do not understand that…..” “All right” I questioned his teacher secretly in my heart, while sympathetic to my brother, but I know this is a good opportunity to teach him.
“I think it should be the relentless and innate desire for self-improvement. Just look at the Yangtze River” He looked down my fingers, the direction of the river”Would you like to know why water is always in the stream? You can put water as human, while those lower-lying areas are the inadequacies of people. Water continuously flow to fill the lowlands, the same goes for people, they also need changing to make u
My family is located in the Yangtze River. One day at dusk, when I was on a rocking chair enjoying the fresh air and the magazine when I suddenly ran over my brother, an 11 years old boy. ”BOA, what do you think contributed to people's changed?” “What? Why did you suddenly asking such a question?” I was very surprised. “It’s homework. Oh, I really do not understand that…..” “All right” I questioned his teacher secretly in my heart, while sympathetic to my brother, but I know this is a good opportunity to teach him.
“I think it should be the relentless and innate desire for self-improvement. Just look at the Yangtze River” He looked down my fingers, the direction of the river”Would you like to know why water is always in the stream? You can put water as human, while those lower-lying areas are the inadequacies of people. Water continuously flow to fill the lowlands, the same goes for people, they also need changing to make u
这种故事版的很有难度 如果能写的完美无敌 当然推荐 但是很难达到这种境界的 一般中国人还都是 议论文的类似于托福的很多的例子为妙 具体的可以问我啊 O(∩_∩)O~
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